There are five heroes in Taman Cempaka. Mickey Mouse who comes from United Kingdom. He is small and smart. Secondly He-Man who is a barbarian. He has a sword and he is the most powerful man in the universe. After that, Gundam. He is a battle robot and he has a sword and a shield. Next, Doraemon. He has a magic pocket with full of magic items. Finally son Goku who is strong and he has super saya power.
All of them one day met in the LRT while they are on their own business trip. At that time, they don't know each other when suddenly the LRT stopped dramatically and every one's panic.
At that particular time, all the five heroes tried to figure out the problem and they are all showing their power and capability.
Doraemon took out his magic door to escape from the LRT while He-man used his power to put the LRT back on the track with the help of Gundam to push the train to the station.
Son Goku observed and controlled the situation to ensure there was no massive injuries and then Mickey mouse investigate the cause of the problem since that mickey is the most smartest one among the others and he figured out that the problem is caused by the 'Dark Lord'.
After getting the information, Doraemon took out foods from his pocket and all of the heroes enjoyed the food together. They left the problem to Harry Potter to solve it because he has magic power to defeat Dark Lord who is also a WITCH!
----------------------> THE SUPER HEROES<----------------------
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| MICKEY MOUSE |
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| HE MAN |
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| GUNDAM |
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| DORAEMON |
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| SON GOKU |
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| DARK LORD THE EVIL THE WITCH!!!!!!!! |
7 comments:
The story just a simple as your mind, not a standard of degree student:p, but congratulation, and keep it up!
The reflection:
1) we can't find much the value in this story but the only one is they try to help others even though they didn't know each others.
After we read your blog, our team was find out your blog is like a child story. so we decide you need to have an adult imagination. keep in touch...!!!!
Remind: Need to improve your imagination to your standard level..
A very simple story but its quite good. We can see that actually you can elaborate more from the story. Work harder to improve your stories in future.
Moral of the story: We should help each other in every situation.
your story is so bored and can make we sleepy when we read it..but for the moral value we like it :)
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OUR COMMENTS:
Should add more pictures and colors because the presentation is a bit dull.Please do not use 'rojak' language.Overall,you guys did a good job. ;)
wooaooww... negative metaphor.As an outsider, i thought that the story is quite interesting.Actually it is harder to think like a child."Need to improve your imagination to your standard level.."no need to said like that . .you can freely imagination
..that is the way how can we developed our imagination.
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